Ludwig's Castle

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Average Rating: 4 (1 votes)

28th Apr 2015, 6:23 PM
Who says LEGO kings don't have dreams? Ludwig certainly has. Let's see how that is working out for him... :-)

ideas.lego.com/projects/1128

Comments:

I find the concept of Lego comics fascinating. It's like having your own customizable 3-D set to base your story on. The Lego Ideas project of Neuschwanstein Castle is a great one.

I love how you used camera angles to make the comic compelling to look at. There is also an attempt made to set up a story and tell it to the reader. Bravo!

My only quibbles are the line "This cannot succeed. It is madness!"

Why can't it succeed? You give no reason why the idea of building the castle was "madness."

Not enough finances? Not enough land? You don't tell the reader.

Besides that, a good effort. I'm interested enough to follow this comic. That's not something I say about your usual LEGO comic.

-Trig

21st Jan 2015, 8:35 PM edit delete reply

Thanks for your comment! You are right about the dialogue, it's not quite clear they think he is a bit megalomaniac... Glad you like it though!

22nd Jan 2015, 9:20 PM edit delete reply

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